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That was good, but it seemed like some of the parts of the animation that should have gone slower, went way too fast. You had some really interesting angles though, keep up the good work.

DId you ever read the story of ehud and the king? It's similar to this one.

Good work, animation was pretty nice to look at. I thought it wasn't as fast paced as I would like, but it was a good use of sound effects.

twinfang responds:

Thanks! ;)
No, don't know.
This story is ispired from book written by me...

I understand your work, and I agree. way too much of everything.

thank you! i think that needed to be said.

Hey, good job.

Really not a bad animation, I think. The animation could have been a bit more polished in some parts (smoother, angles, etc.), but not a bad effort. I found the story line humorous, but the voices were kind of mumbled near the end, so it got kind of confusing.
Otherwise, good job. loved the irony.

JonHunter responds:

Thanks man, you're one of the few who got the point.
I'm really taking this in, I agree with you completely. Practice makes perfect, amiright?

Well done!

I loved the animation, and and the song is good too. You were able to make characters that were enjoyable to watch, even though they didn't have any immediate personality. At the beginning i was very eager to see what they all did!

The only thing I have to say is that the syncing is not completely on. The first time I watched it, the syncing was perfect, but when I replayed every time after that, the music and actions were not at all on sync. I watched it 3 times: the first time was perfect, the second was off by 2-3 beats and the third was perhaps off by 1 beat. I'm not sure if this has anything to do with scrolling the page?
In any case, you might want to look into this in the future, but overall, good work!

Well done!

This animation is very cool. The character designs are superb, camera shots are good, and the action scenes are very cool. The scene with the gun and the rope was one of the coolest action scenes I've seen.
I only thing I would say is that the use of minimum shading isn't my favorite. You have a good art style, but i personally prefer more shading in the characters. \i find without the shading, there is a tendency for the animation to look amateur. Thats just me though.

QuasimodoxArt responds:

Thanks!

I agree with your opinion, it would looks much better with additional shading, but instead, I spent my time and focus on drawing enough frames for more smooth animation... It's kind of quality vs quantity... you know.

I don't have a lot to say

But good job. simplistic, but very nice effects, which I think is probably the best part. well done.

I've always made this kind of joke

Quite funny! Made me laugh. Well done.

Good stuff

I really liked the animation and art in this one. Very good. However, I was a little unsure about the storyline. I could only determine the finer details because I read the description, ie, that the last egg belonged to Mallory. Still, an 8 out of 10 because of the quality. I wouldn't define it as perfect though.

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